The
Great Experiences in Writing 1
Writing is
something interesting that can express a person's idea into a sparkle and great creation. Writing Subject is one of a subject that I learn as an English education student. I studied writing 1 last semester. However, Writing 1 was not an easy subject to learn. I found many difficulties in exploring my idea. I studied Writing 1 with Mr. Saunir and Mrs. Witri, but Mrs. Witri only taught for 2
months. It would be a month until she gave her birth. So, she was replaced by
Mr. Hafiz. When I studied writing 1, I felt writing was a subject that I loved to learn.
In writing, I
could express the idea that came into my mind even though the idea did not come
quickly. It took much time to get the inspiration. Actually, I loved studying Writing
1 but I had several problems in writing paragraph or essay. I had to imagine
something to get an idea for writing in a short time. Besides that, I had to
write it in the correct grammar. However, I strove to make my writing better
than before.
When I studied
with Mr.Saunir, the class began early in the morning. All of the students must come
before seven o’clock. If the students came late even only for one minute, he or
she would not be allowed to join the class. As a result, he or she could not follow
the studying process at that day. Because of attendance was very important to
him, Mr. Saunir was very strict about time and presences. If students came late
to the class without reasonable reason, he or she would be absent. When I
studied with Mr. Saunir, he asked me to make a paragraph for every topic that I
was going to learn. He did not explain the materials before studying but he
explained the materials after one of the students as a volunteer presented his
or her paragraph in front of the class. I was very happy to show my writing
essay to him because he appreciated every student who wanted to show his or her
essay in front of the class.
When I studied
with Mrs. Witri, it was something else. She was very careful about checking the
assignments. But, she just checked some of the assignments. It was okay because
she returned them to me. Therefore, I knew my ability and what needed to be
increased.
After teaching
for two months, Mrs. Witri was replaced by Mr. Hafiz because Mrs.Witri could
not teach in my class anymore until the end of the semester because she was
going to bear her baby. When I studied with Mr. Hafiz, he always explained the
materials clearly for each topic in every meeting. He used interesting Power
Point to explain the materials. He also asked me to make a paragraph or essay
that related to the topic and he also gave a clear guidance.
These were some
of my experiences in studying Writing 1 with Mr. Saunir, Mrs. Witri and Mr. Hafiz. Even though, each lecturer had their
own way of teaching, I learned many worth things that were very important to be
applied in order to be a good writer.
My Expectations in Writing 2 This Semester
My Expectations in Writing 2 This Semester
Although
Writing 2 is more challenging than Writing 1, I believe that I will be
successful in studying Writing 2 and get an A. I have some hopes in studying
writing 2 for this third semester.
.
First, I hope I can increase and expand my writing skills because I think my
writing skill is not good enough. Second, I hope I can understand the materials
better. Next, I hope I can enjoy the process of studying more. I hope the class
will not be boring and rigid. Furthermore, I hope I can be a more organized
person; so that, I can manage the time for studying, make assignment, group
work and the other things. In addition, I hope I can do well on the writing
test this semester.
In
sum, all of these hopes make me have to do everything better than before. I
have to change the strategies in studying to increase my abilities and skills
in English especially in writing. I have big expectations for Writing 2 in this
semester and I believe I can increase my quality and skill.
I like the way you deliver your text in brief... however, you should pay close attention to thesis statement in your introductory paragraph and make sure that your concluding paragraph cover all points you've been talking in your body paragraph...
BalasHapuskeep on fire... :)
thanks for your advice Siti.
BalasHapusit will make my text better than before.
yeah, I agree with siti's suggestion... but I think it would be better if you combine the two essays in order your essay more perfect.
BalasHapusThanks for your suggestion wiwi.
BalasHapusridha, it is better if you develop it in a good essay.pay attention with your elements of paragraph to make you essay perfect
BalasHapus:)
ridha,, i agree with siti's suggestion,
BalasHapusbut i think this is a good essay..
I also agree with sity
BalasHapuskeep writing Ridha